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Solar panel cleaning by ilolamai

:iconcandycloud-bookworm:
My second critique!
Yet again you have produced a great piece of artwork!
An interesting scene idea, very original (yay! Full marks for that, then!).
What I think I like most is the fact all of the girls have different costumes, each done with care.
Amazing background, as usual!!!
There's a couple of things I think you should consider changing:
The girl sitting on the edge of the panels - her hat is unnaturally placed (unless its windy, which I don't think it is...)
Everything up close is very clear and bright apart from the bottles in the cardboard box, which are slightly blurred (but only slightly!)

BUt anyway, a really nice piece, upload more soon!
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Thank you very much for your critique candycloud.I'm very sorry for my late reply.

Thanks for your suggestion about hat and bottles,i will remember that.I will upload more^^
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