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Solar panel cleaning by ilolamai

:iconcandycloud-bookworm:
My second critique!
Yet again you have produced a great piece of artwork!
An interesting scene idea, very original (yay! Full marks for that, then!).
What I think I like most is the fact all of the girls have different costumes, each done with care.
Amazing background, as usual!!!
There's a couple of things I think you should consider changing:
The girl sitting on the edge of the panels - her hat is unnaturally placed (unless its windy, which I don't think it is...)
Everything up close is very clear and bright apart from the bottles in the cardboard box, which are slightly blurred (but only slightly!)

BUt anyway, a really nice piece, upload more soon!
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:iconilolamai:
Thank you very much for your critique candycloud.I'm very sorry for my late reply.

Thanks for your suggestion about hat and bottles,i will remember that.I will upload more^^
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