My second critique!
Yet again you have produced a great piece of artwork!
An interesting scene idea, very original (yay! Full marks for that, then!).
What I think I like most is the fact all of the girls have different costumes, each done with care.
Amazing background, as usual!!!
There's a couple of things I think you should consider changing:
The girl sitting on the edge of the panels - her hat is unnaturally placed (unless its windy, which I don't think it is...)
Everything up close is very clear and bright apart from the bottles in the cardboard box, which are slightly blurred (but only slightly!)

BUt anyway, a really nice piece, upload more soon!